Monday, September 5, 2011

THE MUSE HELPS THOSE . . .

Today my guest is Barbara Monajem, who writes historical and paranormal romance. Her words flow so easily, you'll be drawn into her stories from the first paragraph.  
The concept of “God helps those who help themselves” has been around since ancient Greece, and I’m convinced that it applies to that most enigmatic of deities, the Muse.
A few weeks ago I was mired halfway through a manuscript, wondering how (as a writer friend aptly put it) I would pull the rabbit out of the hat once again. This bog in the middle of the book is a familiar stopover in my writing journeys. In the interest of efficiency, I’ve been striving to find a path around it -- with limited success. Try as I may, I can’t think the whole story up ahead of time. I have an idea of how things will go, but it usually morphs into something else and something else and something else again, until at the end its origins are lost. I can dream up a hero and heroine with suitable motivations. I can think up scenes that might take place.  But none of these make a good story.
Sometimes the Muse gives me an opening scene, something I just *have* to write down, but it’s only a teaser -- a peek into the world of the story. I have to pay in real work to get any genuine understanding of the characters and their journey. The Muse wants to go for a ride, and then another ride and another, and unless I oblige her by writing, writing, and writing some more, regardless of whether I can see where I’m going, she won’t play her part. Somewhere in the middle, I end up in a sort of Slough of Despond where I wonder if I should chuck the whole thing and start over.
Not at all! I just have to do a bit of thinking and then a lot more writing to get through it…plod, plod, plod, and zing! Now the muse takes me for a ride, and this is when the truly wonderful stuff emerges – the deepest motivations, the awesome surprises, the “duh” moments when everything that’s buried in the story comes out.
Because amazingly, the story is all there right from the start! Stuff that showed up in the beginning magically fits with other stuff at the end. Missing pieces of the puzzle lock into place, and at last there’s a coherent whole. It’s an astonishing process, and at the end of each story I can’t help but believe in the Muse, because I couldn’t possibly have done it all on my own.
After writing a number of books, I’ve begun to have confidence that this is how story works for me – and to look forward to the plodding, because I’m so eager to see what the Muse will surprise me with next.
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Barbara Monajem wrote her first story in third grade about apple tree gnomes. After dabbling in neighborhood musicals and teen melodrama, she published a middle-grade fantasy when her children were young. Now her kids are adults, and she's writing historical and paranormal romance for grownups. She lives in Georgia with an ever-shifting population of relatives, friends, and feline strays. http://www.barbaramonajem.com/
Ellis's Note: I confess to sneaking this photo in--it's probably my favorite author photo ever. This woman is a writer!
Rose Fairburn is on the run. Her vampire nature can’t protect her from everything, especially not herself. Now, when she should be worried about escaping her past, she can only think about one thing. Her kind can’t live without blood or sex. Love they must forego.
Jack Tallis can slake her thirst. Tall. Handsome. Trustworthy. And not a man alive can resist a vamp’s allure. But…Jack can. And he has other secrets, like why underworld hit men are on his trail, and how he can vanish into thin air. Love suddenly seems possible, but the shadows hide mysteries darker than Rose can even dream, and all will be revealed in the fetish clubs of one strange Louisiana town….
at Amazon
Governess Pompeia Grant thinks pretending to be Sir James Carling’s wife as a favor to his sister will be harmless. She is haunted by his rejection of her youthful advances, but she’s desperate for a place to stay after losing her last post.
When James unexpectedly returns home from America, she assumes the game is up—until James encourages her to stay, and enjoy the pleasurable consequences of their charade.
at Amazon

14 comments:

E. B. Davis said...

I find that my muse apppeals to my senses, which inspires me to write. But that alone doesn't get a story written. Mostly the muse is an idea, one for a story or a character that inspires a story, and that just might be my unconscious self. Thinking, puzzling out all those facets and details, is the work of writing. You work well, Barabara. Congratulations on the new book!

Ellis Vidler said...

Barbara, my muse is typical--she's there for the fun of the new idea and then deserts me near the middle. That's when it gets hard, slogging through on my own with nary an idea for where to go next.

Maryn Sinclair said...

Ah, the Muse. Who hasn't faced a problem with that fickle lady. I work much the same way you do, Barbara. Characters, an idea, a plot. Kind of. Sometimes I feel the story writes me rather than the other way around. I have Sunrise on my Kindle. I'm going to get my WIP out, then read. But there's always a WIP, isn't there?

Barbara Monajem said...

E.B. -- I wish my muse inspired me through my senses, because I love sensory details when reading. Right now I'm reading a romance by Loretta Chase (Silk is for Seduction) where the heroine is a fashionable dressmaker, and the sensory detail just blows me away.

Barbara Monajem said...

Ellis -- Sounds like your muse and mine are part of the same conspiracy to drive authors nuts in the middle of the book. :) But I forgive mine near the end when she shows me the good stuff. (But don't tell her. If she hears I dared to suggest she needs forgiveness, who knows what she might hit me with next!)

Barbara Monajem said...

Maryn -- Yes, the story does seem to run the show, doesn't it? I hardly ever get enough time for reading these days. I just came home from a vacation where I read one whole book (in three weeks -- it's crazy) and got halfway through another.

Beth Trissel said...

How very interesting about the workings of your Muse, Barbara. I must keep company with her twin sister because my evolving story process is much the same. Try as I might to do otherwise.

Barbara Monajem said...

Beth -- I bet we're in company with a LOT of other writers. Maybe we should form a union, go on strike... Nah, our muses would just go torment someone else...

Jacqueline Seewald said...

Finding the Muse requires time to focus in, a precious commodity. Love your cover art!

Barbara Monajem said...

So true, Jacqueline. I didn't write much when my kids were young because finding time to focus was so difficult. Writing consumes quite a bit of emotional energy!

Mary Marvella said...

I'm afraid my muse is hiding. She wants me to write and ignore comments from critiques and contests and rejections. Should I listen to her? She was pleased I Indie published two of the stories she let me write and is pouting about the others she helped me write.

Barbara Monajem said...

Mary, if you didn't listen to her, what would you write? What would you do that was different from what you're doing now? Would you enjoy the change, or would it be no fun at all ignoring your muse?

Ellis Vidler said...

When I get comments from contests/critiques, I try to consider them and figure out what bothered the reader. I may not use their fix, but I usually do something that I hope improves the problem. Barbara, do you still have critique partners or readers? Or did you ever?

Barbara Monajem said...

I've belonged to two critique groups and had a few critique partners, but now I rely mostly on my daughters to be my first readers. I belong to an online loop as well, where I post scenes several times a year. Otherwise, my editors do most of the critiquing.

For me, the most useful contest feedback came from the people who neither loved nor hated my writing, because their comments showed me how I might improve it.