tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2932500187353859270.post6918497368559971694..comments2024-02-13T15:37:51.463-05:00Comments on Ellis Vidler's Unpredictable Muse: Creating TransitionsEllis Vidlerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11918353154644739285noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2932500187353859270.post-39519980182104828992011-05-16T11:12:50.633-04:002011-05-16T11:12:50.633-04:00Transitions are very tricky. I need to go through...Transitions are very tricky. I need to go through my YA novel and check out my transitions, since it's kind of a time traveling type thing (not sure what to really classify it as since it has a magic mirror that allows the character to see things in her grandmother's life or the past or something like that - lol - been a while since I've actually looked at it). This will help me be elysabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07052446855668120700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2932500187353859270.post-52306979198764574252011-05-14T22:00:06.897-04:002011-05-14T22:00:06.897-04:00Flashbacks are on my list. They're tricky, but...Flashbacks are on my list. They're tricky, but I think they can be very effective.Ellis Vidlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11918353154644739285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2932500187353859270.post-80111671841293204672011-05-14T06:56:21.683-04:002011-05-14T06:56:21.683-04:00In my just-published book, Sexual Persuasion, ther...In my just-published book, Sexual Persuasion, there's a flashback story within the present story. I tried to transition from one to the other by relating the present to the past going back in time and the past to the present coming forward. It's a tricky problem with multiple flashbacks because you don't want to jar the reader.Maryn Sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07306180422032901064noreply@blogger.com